Evolved Ideas for the piece

Since our initial meeting, I have come up with some ideas of my own that I think will help the film work well. I have since shown these to my group and they seemed to agree on the majority. Here is a copy of what I created:

I really like my idea of using a Steven Berkoff style of acting for the two teenage boys. I have experience in this area as I studied it as part of my A Level drama and performed my own version of 'Metamorphosis'. Because of this, I understand the effect it can have on an audience - and this could be enhanced much further in the style of camera work and editing.

An example of the type of shots I would like for Lola's point of view of the teenage boys would be:

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I like the idea of the boys having bulging eyes and prominent teeth. It will really enhance the element of fear.

References:

1. http://www.google.com/imgres?q=fisheye+lens+teeth&um=1&hl=en&client=safari&sa=X&tbo=d&rls=en&authuser=0&biw=1280&bih=680&tbm=isch&tbnid=2l3dalELSZ0eoM:&imgrefurl=http://www.istockphoto.com/stock-photo-13702349-crazy-man-with-strange-face-portrait-fisheye-lens.php&docid=J4gMnvLakj9K8M&imgurl=http://i.istockimg.com/file_thumbview_approve/13702349/2/stock-photo-13702349-crazy-man-with-strange-face-portrait-fisheye-lens.jpg&w=380&h=365&ei=6BCtUIX-Ooqq0AWpwoHgBA&zoom=1&iact=rc&dur=265&sig=117828630293561111691&page=1&tbnh=139&tbnw=147&start=0&ndsp=26&ved=1t:429,r:24,s:0,i:159&tx=74&ty=83