I understand that the script is still under 5 minutes in length, however, the film will include much of Lola's journey which is only briefly mentioned in the script. There have been numerous other versions of the script and I have sometimes felt disappointed when my group aren't happy with it as I have tried to include everything that I can to keep everyone happy. I have chosen to stick with this version as I feel it has good emotional tension - especially at the confrontation with the two boys.
A section that I did add went as follows:
Some members of the group liked this section but others didn't. Although I thought it would make the film a bit more dynamic, I understood that it would be difficult to find an actress for this sequence.
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